Questions tagged [dialogue]

Questions about authored conversations between two or more people as found in books, plays, or films. Please use the "conversations" tag for natural spoken conversations

Use this tag for questions that are about scripted conversations between two or more people as a feature of a book, play, or film.

Consider the question checklist to determine whether the tag is suitable for your question. You can also look at the example questions. If this tag doesn't fit your question, have a look at the tags listed below, to see whether one or more of them might fit your question better.

Question checklist

  • Is the question about a conversation between two or more characters?
  • Does the question quote the source of this conversation?
  • Does the question clearly describe your concern regarding the dialogue?

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Stealing the topic from another person when he or she is going to tell you something

When someone is starting to tell you something from his or her life, some persons are immediately interrupting and starting to talk about the same topic, but from their own perspective instead. Example: Person A: I just came back from Italy, I had…
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How do you convey that something is said slowly in written dialogue?

I am writing a dialogue and I want a word to be said slowly so it is clarified. The dialogue goes like this "What's this?" "It's a Bellis perennis." "What?" "Bellis perennis." (I want this to be said slowly) Should I separate the letters with…
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Is 'lamented' a dialogue tag?

In these sentences, "I miss having breakfast every day," he lamented. "I miss having breakfast every day." He lamented. is the first correct? I would say lamented is a dialogue tag, since if I use the verb said or responded instead, then it…
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Help with dialogue tags!

Should the sentence be: "What is this?" The man demanded. OR "What is this?" The man said demandingly. I was under the impression that you needed to have 'said' in the sentence for it to be proper. You couldn't just have demanded. Is this correct?
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Can you add a colon before quotations instead of a comma?

Is it possible to add a colon instead of a comma before quotations? Like this: Person A said: "Blah Blah Blah." Not as in theatrical performance, but as used in an story.
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Relationship between topics and speech acts/dialogue acts in a sentence

I am still ambiguous about the relationship between topics and speech acts/dialogue acts in a sentence. Are the topics selected as conditional on speech acts/dialogue acts (or vice versa) in a sentence? Or the both of topics and speech acts/dialogue…
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Dialogue from the motion picture " Captain America - The First Avenger".What is she implying in this sentence?

This is a dialogue from the motion picture " Captain America - The First Avenger": Steve Rogers: Well, what about you and Stark? How do I know you two haven't been...fonduing? [she turns to look at him] Peggy Carter: You still don't know a bloody…
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Can time breaks be shown using dialogue breaks

By ending a set of quotation marks and starting a new set, can this show a break in time? E.g. "I need to read the letter before I can comment." "It looks like he's determined to come here." Here, the dialogue shows that there is a time break…
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Meaning of "inspecting the truce" in this context

No matter how many times I watch the SWOR trailer "Return", I can't grasp this interaction: -Bounty hunter peeks at a what seems to be an attractive female. +Eyes front. -Just inspecting the truce, corporal. Am I just hearing the word "truce"…
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How to break a quote with narrative in a single sentence?

In creative writing (US English), what is the most appealing way to insert a bit of narrative within dialog in a single sentence? For example: “The unified kingdom of my childhood,” Lucy hoped to avoid discussing the reasons for its disintegration;…
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"a square deal from me and most of the breaks"

I was watching The Maltese Falcon and there's a scene when Dundy, a cop, tells Sam Spade (who Dundy thinks may have murdered someone) the following: Well, you know me, Spade. If you did it, or if you didn't, you'll get a square deal from me and…
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Grammatical correctness of continuing sentences off dialogue tags

The following is a quote from Philip Pullman's 'La Belle Sauvage': "It's a present for her," said Malcolm, and thrust it in among Lyra's blankets. Now, to me, this sentence doesn't really parse, so I guess I'm looking for an explanation of why…
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Reasking in answer to "How are you?"

sorry for probably similar questions were already asked but I can't find exactly this: If I'm greeted by "How are you?", should I answer with "Fine, thanks, and you" as school books usually suggest? My sister insists that "Fine" is really…
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A Sentence in Lost Series

I was watching Lost (again) yesterday and someone said: " - Well, then. I guess I won't have to convince you after all." " - I'm not going to kill -spoiler-, Ben. You are." My question is: I was expecting the end of the sentence not with a "You…