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I need help with this sentence:

Thus, heat pumps can(,) for instance(,) run whenever there is a high generation of PV electricity(,) or there is a need to increase the electrical load in the grid.

So basically there are three commas that I am unsure about. I would tend to use them. Should I?

tchrist
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PeterBe
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I wouldn't use the last comma, although it is possible to use it, and I'd either suppress one ellipsis or use one more (rather this latter possibility).

  • "Thus, heat pumps can, for instance, run whenever there is a high generation of PV electricity or whenever there is a need to increase the electical load in the grid".

  • "Thus, heat pumps can, for instance, run whenever there is a high generation of PV electricity) or a need to increase the electical load in the grid".

LPH
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