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Someone told me that this sentence is wrong grammatically:

Where is the calculator that I lent it to you yesterday?

I've read the feedbacks from many people that I shouldn't include "it", one person said it is because there's already "that" so that it would be redundant if I add "it".

Apart from all that, could you tell me in detail what is wrong with my sentence, what shouldn't I add and what should I add? If my guess is correct, are these sentences correct? Thanks in advance!

  1. Where is the calculator that I lent to you yesterday?
  2. Where is the calculator I lent it to you yesterday?
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  • Where is the calculator? I lent it to you yesterday. 4. Where is the calculator such that I lent it to you yesterday. Add those variants to your collection. The third is acceptable. The fourth is questionable.
  • – Gary Botnovcan Jul 25 '22 at 01:45
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    @GaryBotnovcan Your #3 doesn't apply to this question, and your #4 is ungrammatical. "Such that" doesn't work that way. – gotube Jul 25 '22 at 03:30
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    The relevance of 3 is that it's a grammatically correct word-for-word representation of OP's 2. 4 is an exercise left to the reader. – Gary Botnovcan Jul 25 '22 at 03:47
  • [feedback] is better. Relative clauses refer to a main clause and do not require repetition of the thing referred to. – Lambie Jul 25 '22 at 15:41
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    The top answer here is wrong. It is not the case that you cannot use it in the example because of the word that. Even if you don't use the word that, you still cannot use the word it in that example! The answer is that the gap in a relative clause does an important job. If you fill in the gap with a pronoun, there's no gap any more! – Araucaria - Not here any more. Jul 26 '22 at 09:16
  • @Araucaria-Nothereanymore.: I would argue that if "that" were omitted, it is omitted because it is commonly and implicitly understood. But even when it is omitted, it's function has not ceased to exists, because "that" is still implicitly understood to be there. In that sense, the top answer is correct. It's not specifically because the word "that" is explicitly used; but it is because "that" (whether explicit or implicit) in the sentence is already doing what "it" would also be doing, thereby creating a conflict/redundancy. – Flater Jul 27 '22 at 08:47
  • @Flater But it doesn't do the job that it does. This that, which is subordinator, not a pronoun, is usually optiopnal: I think that I lent it to you yesterday versus I think I lent it to you yesterday. The difference between those sentences and the OP's has nothing to do with that but, rather, has got to do with the fact that relative clauses need a gap! – Araucaria - Not here any more. Jul 27 '22 at 11:11
  • @Araucaria-Nothereanymore.: You're splitting hairs between something being optional (your description) and being able to omit it (my description), which is effectively equivalent. In reality, the word is not explicitly present (regardless of whether you consider it omitted or optionally not used), but the location of the subordinate clause acts as an implicit subordinator, i.e. the location of the subordinate clause attaches it to what came right before it in the main clause ("the calculator"). – Flater Jul 27 '22 at 11:14
  • As a remark: repeating a pronoun is ungrammatical in English (and possibly in Indo-European languages in general), but it may be quite normal in some other languages. I think Semitic languages allow such repetitions. – Roger V. Jul 27 '22 at 13:03
  • @RogerVadim Yes, correlative clauses usually have no gap. – Araucaria - Not here any more. Jul 27 '22 at 18:51