She has to be shot a tourist attraction video for Japanese tomorrow forenoon, starring her. (not herself, because someone shoots the video starring her.)
If I get rid of comma(,) in "video for Japanese, starring her", it comes to mean she is Japanese ?
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It isn't constructed quite correctly and contains some words/phrases which are not natural.
Even though "shooting" is the correct verb for creating video footage, we tend not to say people have been "shot", or are "being shot", because it sounds like they've been shot with a gun. Better to move that verb to make it clear that it is a video shoot.
Rather than say "she is in it" and then repeat "starring her", it makes more sense to state that once at the beginning.
"Forenoon", while it is a word, is not commonly used. Better to use the more natural "morning".
She is starring in a Japanese tourist attraction video shooting tomorrow morning.
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Or simply: "She has {to shoot} a video for Japanese tourists, tomorrow {before noon (or morning).} – whiskeychief Nov 24 '19 at 14:13